VAC_Sammy

= = =Samuel in the Virtual Author's Chair = = =

May 15, 2009 We typed this story because in kindergarten writing, it goes on for 10 pages! This is a story that Samuel wrote and revised completely independently. I fixed his some of his spelling and punctuation for him when I typed the story. || I am in the rain. It is fun to play in. I get wet. I like it. I can have fun in the rain. I love to count the rain drops. There is 168. I can't believe it! Now I will go inside. My clothes are wet.  I am hungry. And then, I went back outside. I had more fun than last time! Mom was big. Mom grabbed me. But there was a crocodile outside. I ran inside. I was scared! I am never gonna go outside again. But, I went back outside. There was 3 crocodiles. The next thing I saw was snow. I need boots. I need a coat. I fell in a hole. "Oh, no! I can not find the way out. Mom," he yelled, "Where am I? A monster, ahhh! Help, help, help, help, help, help, help, help." "Stop saying help. I see you." "Who are you?" "I am Mom." I was surprised to see mom. The monster grabbed me. "Help, help, help, help, help, help, help." Samuel is gone! "I forgot who I am and where am I?" "Hey, Samuel." "I can not see anything. I am blind. Oh, noooooooooo!" But, I see 309 alligators. I can't believe it. Crunch, crunch, crunch, crunch, crunch. The alligators are getting closer. "I hope I don't get bit up." No more Samuel. This is the end. || April 10, 2009
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This piece is a response to the prompt: "Write about something that happened long ago and why you think it was interesting." Samuel edited his piece for spelling and punctuation. He was careful to leave spaces between words when he re-copied his work. || == == ||